Paper finally submitted....received feedback on week 2 presentation

I finally submitted the paper...today.

 
I like the course. I am learning a lot But everything feels rushed & I feel pressured all the time. This is because of the resource constraints I am dealing with right now (issues with my laptop - need to use library resources, need to read an entire book for the assignment, and so on). I hope it gets better. I am working on solutions.

The week 3 assignment:

Included here: https://www.researchgate.net/project/Completing-the-PhD-Level-Business-Environment-Course-BUS-7110


Feedback on the week 2 assignment:

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Paper in progress....

The paper is coming along nicely. I like it a lot! I removed innovation from last week's slides....I get to cover innovation this week.

My computer time is almost up. The library closes in an hour. I hope I finish this paper today.

What I have so far: